<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class=""><div class="">Here is my initial AB review of the Cube Sat Reference Model</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Before I start ....</div><div class="">----------------------</div><div class="">This has come a loooooooooong way and is now looking really nice, thanks to Daniel's substantial effort! Thank you!</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">A. Machine Readable Files</div><div class="">-------------------------------------</div><div class="">The XMI looks fine.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">B. Inventory</div><div class="">-----------------</div><div class="">The version stamps of the URLs look wrong. The XMI defines a version stamp of "20210801" in the CSRM URL, but the Inventory uses "20210501". This should be updated to "20210801"</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">[ luckily for me, I found at least one error :-) ]</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">C. Document</div><div class="">------------------</div><div class="">General remark: </div><div class="">- The font of all the «stereotype» mentionings is not consistent. </div><div class="">- Throughout the document, please insert a blank line after the "Gneralization" bulleted lists.</div><div class="">These, and most of my other comments are EDITORIAL, but I suggeste to fix at Beta-1 publishing the latest, as it would be a real pain to fix in FTF.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">You need to discuss the front page with Michelle and Jason, lots of things are in flux there. But I guess there will be a lot more changes until the FTF is over....</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">The OMG address in "Preface - Restricted Rights Legend" needs updating [This is an OMG Template Error]</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">In 7.1.3 MissionNeed - Insert a space between «Mission» and "or by one or more ..."</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">In 7.1.9 ComponentRequirement - shluld the «component» at the end of the first line be capitalized? («Component»)?</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">In 7.1.11 SpaceSegmentRequirement - Inconsitent font size throughout the paragraph.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">In 7.4.2 Validation - The formating of the "Parameters" list looks odd.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">D. Final Question</div><div class="">-----------------------</div><div class="">Can a Cube Sat be round …….. ?? ;-)</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Manfred</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">
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